WALT: write narrative.
Task Description: For this weeks assignment I had to write a narrative about a picture. The Young Detective." Some students from my class helped me improve my writing. Mrs. Moala started off our writing. (Teachers writing in blue. The writing in black which is mine.) I hope to finish this writing soon.
The Young Detective
It had been three days since it had gone missing. One minute he had held it in his hand, the next it had vanished. How could it just have disappeared? It had been right in front of his eyes!
He had been warned about what would happen if he lost it. His mission had been to guard the key with his life, ever since they visited him last summer.
Adam had always had a detective’s instinct. They had told him as much. He had been chosen because he had certain skills, and he would need them more than ever now.
Only one clue had seemingly been left, which was sat on the living room table.
Holding the magnifying glass up to his eye, Adam began to investigate…
Adam’s eyes were at his highest peak but that peak wasn’t good enough to look for the key which he was meant to guard. Adam was trying his hardest and with his smart detective’s skill he remembered that Adam had taken photos of the key,
“May I please have the camera” sounding like a detective,
His father repiling “Why do you what the camera?”
Adam saying again in a detective voice “Because I need to look at some photos,”
His father said “Fine fine, but only because you need some help.”
So Adam was looking through the photo he had taken, Adam found the picture he was looking for. But there was something different about this picture, the picture Adam was looking at the key had also vanished too. Adam was determined to still look for the vanished key.
Adam was determined to look for the vanished key. Adam looked through books, under and over stuff, Adam still can’t find the vanished key.
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