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Thursday 13 February 2020

S.E.E Writing

For this task we were learning how to write an explanation piece of writing and what to put in it.  I hope I can improve this year.

Element 1:picking up rubbish 

People around the countries leave their rubbish on the ground & pretend that people act like it’s not theirs. When they leave the rubbish on the ground the wind  picks it up and goes into the lake and kills sea creatures. Kiwi’s and people around the countries should place their rubbish away in the bins so we can save the environment.For example, when someone is eating food they leave their rubbish behind and do nothing and someone else comes and picks it up.

Element 2: chuck it in the right bin

People in New Zealand are just putting their rubbish in any bins.People around the world are not putting the right rubbish in the right bins, and I think we should put in the right bin’s.For example, people finish eating their banana and then put it in the yellow bin, instead of putting it in the red bin.

Element 3: Don’t just do it at school (home, street’s)

Kiwi’s are not also chucking the rubbish on the street.Like when you see rubbish anywhere like school, home, or the street you just pick it up and put it in the bin.For example, when some is walk pass the rubbish and they don’t pick it up, someone else picks it up and puts it in the bins. 

Element 4; Teach Others (whanau, neighbors)

We teach others so they could have a brighter future and explore the wonders of this world. We teach those who have the capability of showing us how they could listen and respect us then we will do what we can to help you learn. My example is that you do your best to try and keep up with your class and learn as much as you can so you can know what to do when you move up a level.







3 comments:

  1. Hey J!

    Thanks for sharing your learning. I do have one request though, any chance you could explain the type of literacy task this is and what you were learning/trying to achieve here?

    Look forward to seeing your update.

    Much Love
    Ma

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    1. Jacob, I can see you did include a very brief task description at the top of your post (perhaps after mum saw it?). Don't forget that your task description can be labeled and it should be at least 2-3 sentences. I look forward to seeing your writing improve this year.

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  2. Kia Ora Jacob my name is Autumn & I am a year 7 student at Paihia Primary School. I Really enjoyed your post, What does S.E.E stand for In your title? I learnt that I should pick up rubbish even if it isn’t mine while I was reading your post. Did you enjoy doing this & would you do it again?
    Make sure to keep up the good work & check out my blog at: https://psautumnw.blogspot.com/

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