Walt: identifying and resolving issues arising from competing information in texts
Task Description:Room one is learning about cockles. This is what our learning task is about it is about if you agree or disagree that cockles should be gathered at NZ Beaches.
Jacob, thank you for clearly stating your task description. I would really like to see you spend a little more time editing your work before you publish. For example, in the green sentence you have written "u" instead of spelling out the word properly. Do you think if you started your purple and pink sentences with a word or phrase other than because it would make your statement more sophisticated?
Jacob, thank you for clearly stating your task description. I would really like to see you spend a little more time editing your work before you publish. For example, in the green sentence you have written "u" instead of spelling out the word properly. Do you think if you started your purple and pink sentences with a word or phrase other than because it would make your statement more sophisticated?
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