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Thursday 20 June 2019

My Hobby 1st Draft

 Rugby
I’m talking about my favorite hobby which is rugby. Rugby is one of my favorite sports and today I'm going to talk about rugby and how long I’ve been playing for.  

 My Career 
My favourite hobby is rugby because. I like to play with my friends & because I have played rugby for 9 yrs. Rugby is one of my favourite sports, I’ve been playing rugby & rippa when I was 5 yrs old. Playing rugby when I was 5 yrs old was a long time, but in that long time, it was fun because over the past 9 yrs I  was playing with my friends.

 My Team
My rugby team is the Royals. The Royals have been at the Marist rugby club for 8 yrs. There were no Royals in under 8's because we had a break so the coaches had a break for a year. The Royals had came back in the under 9’s. 

 Traveling
The Royals have traveled down to Taupo twice. When the Royals Started, at the end of the yrs finishing Rippa we would get to go to rainbows end. Rainbows end was a fun experience for me & my friends, we were having a fun time.
I hope I can make some rep team such as Bill Mac (Bill Mclaren), Walter Dickson, Roller Mills. Auckland U14, Baby Blacks (All Blacks U20’s), Auckland Colts, Mitre Ten Cup for Auckland & The All Blacks. Do You Want To Play For Some Rep Teams?

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3 comments:

  1. Danni Stone26 June 2019 at 14:27

    Hi Jacob,

    I really like how you organised your ideas into clear paragraphs, your sub headings made it easier for me to know what I was reading about. I learnt lots more about your rugby from reading this text; it is impressive that you have been playing since you were 5! Next time lets work on checking your sentences are clearly structured to make it even easier for your audience to understand your ideas.

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  2. Zaeeda2 July 2019 at 12:57

    Hello Jacob

    I like your post. I know your were into rugby but you really know alot of it. I also like how you have orginzed all the information and placed them properly to make sentences that make sense.

    I am looking forward to more poas
    Keep Up the Great work!

    Zaeeda

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  3. Miss T.A3 July 2019 at 13:05

    Hey Jacob

    Congratulations on making the Auckland East Bill McLaren rugby team! I was beginning to wonder if you enjoyed playing rugby or not. I can see from this piece of writing that you do actually enjoy it, especially being able to play with your friends.

    May you continue to enjoy rugby with your friends, and work hard to achieve your goals.

    Much Love Ma

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